i said it all in the forum!! now i've Come to take her! LOL

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You've got too much talent. Knock it off lol

In all seriousness though, GREAT job. I think her hair might be able to use a few more highlights more towards the top of the head maybe? I could be insane. I do know that on her breasts, the ... front boob line is fine, but the second line, creating the Y shape, could maybe just be shaded in a little, so it isn't so obvious? It just looks kind of weird. Am I making sense?
Her shirt looks great, shiny, like silk or ... some sort of material that looks like silk but isn't silk. I don't know. Great shirt.
The pearls I think, should maybe stand out from the skin a little more, make them more apparent, they just kind of blind in. Whiter maybe? I love the beauty mark. And you can't really tell her eye color, it's just kind of ... white, but it looks great. Gives her personality. Maybe make it a little ... more towards her eye color? Less white highlight? Or are her eyes grey? If so, I feel foolish.
I'm ranting though, EXCELLENT JOB. I love it, great works as always. I hope I wasn't too harsh on my C+C. :]

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thanks! I wasn't entirely true to my lightsource in regards to the hair but the light is supposed to be coming from the side at such an angle that the top of her hair is mostly missed by the light. Aaand, Someone on another mb also mentioned the boob line so I am now in the process of fixing it a bit.

I'm glad it looks like silk because it is supposed to be! I kind of failed at dolling silk last time so I'm extra glad you said you think it quite resembles the fabric

I'm also fixing the pearls a bit- they are almost white already with some white highlights so I'm darkening the shadow around them to make them stand out more^^

As for her eyecolor, yes it is supposed to be grey- I made them really light though because I thought it looked more dramatic to have light eyes next to her black eyeliner- lol I love contrast!

Dont worry, I love loong comments^^ They're my favorite kind especially when they include some sort of c&c. On that note, You weren't too harsh at all- i CRAVE C&C, haha. I'm definatley not one of those people who say they want C&C and then get upset when someone critiques their piece 'too much' XD

Anyways now my reply has gotten overly long! Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you like her!

*silk? I meant to say satin,lol

I can see what you mean about the light source ... it makes sense. :]
Haha yes, it definitely looks like silk. There is definitely nothing you need to correct there haha. And you're right, the lightness of the eyes really does make them stand out against the eyeliner. Geez you're good! Haha, you're welcome for the C+C, I'll remember to help out on whatever you've got coming next [if you could call it helping heh] I look forward to the edit.
Like her! I love her, lol, she's gorgeous.

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*_* Wowza! This doll is so stunning! I envy the way you shade terribly. <3 You make dithering look so clean and smooth! Almost as if it wasn't pixeled at all. :3 Beautiful BEAUTIFUL work!

thank you!

Stunning doll, the shirt is fabulous

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